Vampire Novelist Denise K. Rago

I am mulling over my rewrites and trying to decide where my novel is heading. My editor says I have too many loose ends and little resolved at the end of my story and I tend to agree. It’s just tying up all those threads in a way that appears natural and not contrived. I believe I will focus more on the vampire wars and have the love story as the back drop against the evil that is looming…waiting to slaughter anything in it’s path.

Rewrites make us better writers and I am up to the task…I think.

Struggling with the main focus of my novel. Is it a love story or a story about a war between vampires with a love interest thrown in? This is my plight for the next few weeks, figuring out the main focus. Exciting yes, looking foward to rewrites, yes. Anything to make my novel the best it can be. Not an easy task but a challenge for any writer worth their salt.

Have you ever seen someone you thought might be a “real” vampire? If so, sent a comment my way. I believe I did once in a public restroom at a club. There was something about this woman that made me go hummmmmm….

After getting my editorial letter back I may be heading in a new direction with my novel. Everyone wants more about the eminent vampire wars, so I may give it to them, mixed in with a love story of course. Everyone loves a love story, even if it is about vampires!

I have my work cut out for me but I am excited.

  • by Denise K. Rago

I discovered a new television show on Friday nights at 9pm titled Moonlight. It is about a detective, Mick St. John, who is a vampire living in present day LA. As is usually the case with vampires, he falls in love with a mortal woman; a newspaper reporter he rescued when she was just a child. They are attracted to one another yet he dare not get her too involved in his world. He has a conscious, morals and integrity, just like my main vampire character, Christian. He lives in eternal conflict between his nature and his memory of his human self.

The other television show I was watching (no I don’t watch that much TV, but vampires intrique me in case you haven’t guessed), is Blood Ties. I do not like Vicky, the main character. I find her too hard, too one dimensional. I do like Mike and Henry. So, Friday night is vampire night in my house and I have to ask myself why suddenly all these television shows on “fantasy topics?” Is it the state of our world? Our fear of the unknown? I am not sure but it is a genre who’s time has come – finally.

I am embarking on a new voyage. I have an editor for my novel! I am thrilled to have a professional reading my manuscript. I don’t know how much re-writing I will have to do but I am so excited. Writing is one of the things that I live for, and to rewrite it will only make it a better novel and make me grow as a writer, and isn’t that what it is all about? Writing is one step in the publishing process. I have had friends who also write read my novel but there is something about a professional assessing your work. Some writers may be intimidated by it but I welcome it. I see it as bringing me one step closer to publication!

Much of my novel takes place in an imaginary vampire club in the East Village of Manhattan called the Gray Wolf. I describe it in my book, however, it is a product of my imagination. Have any of you visited a “real” vampire club? If so, would you send me your impressions. Hey, even if you haven’t, what do you imagine a vampire club to look and feel like? What would the music sound like and would you be tempted to enter one?

I needed to make my ending more dramatic and resolve alot of loose ends. Books really do sell on their endings so I needed mine to be more believable. I killed off a character whom I loved. It broke my heart but I did it. I feel like I betrayed one of the main characters by ending the life of one of his closest friends. I am in the midst of rewrites so perhaps I will decide against it and come up with another ending but as it stands right now, he is dead as a doornail.

I have not posted in some time spending much of my free time finishing my novel and working on rewrited before it goes to my editor. A bit intimidating but necessary to make my novel the best it can be.

Tall and lithe with flowing blonde hair to his waist, Christian is a loner. He is pensive, smart, and secretive, with soulful, dark eyes. He is trying to redeem himself through love. His last attempt was in the 18th century. It is time. He once owned a studio in Paris, where he would paint portraits of the aristocracy. Presently, he lives in New York City. He is an art collector who wanders the halls of a world famous museum which is right outside his front door.

He lives with his one and only best friend, Michel Baptiste. A childhood friend from France. Their lives continually connect through women. Women they have both loved and shared between them. Christian is an interesting blend of arrogance and reticence, self-doubt and confidence, lonliness and a love of humanity, despite being immortal. He keeps his deepest emotions to himself though they are never far from the surface.

His favorite clothing to wear (though not necessarily together) are: white shirts with lace sleeves and collars, brown jeans, a long black coat and cowboy boots. He parts his long blonde hair on the side, leaving half of his face in shadows. He is mysterious and passionate, loving books, art and Central Park at night. He hunts very little, and loves even less, until a young mortal woman crosses his path…

I have just finished Immortal Obsession – actually I finished it about a week ago and now I am asking myself is it really finished, how do I know it is done? A wise friend replied “you will know.” Shit, do I know or do I just think I know?

I have to edit the epilogue and then plan on letting it sit for a few days while I mull it over, trying to figure out if it needs more. Then I will reread it. We have no objectivity with our own work so as much as I try to look at it from a distance, it is impossible.

Two writing buddies have the first three chapters to read and edit. I want the first three chapters to really grab the reader, though I suppose they must grab a publisher or an agent first! In some strange way I feel that now the hard part begins, selling it